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Neend mein nahi thi aur na jaagi hi thi main
Na jaane thi kahan pe, kyun gum thi kahin main
Ehsaas ne tere aise mujhko ghayal kar diya
Ki madhosh bhi thi aur kuch behosh thi main.
Aankhon ne har taraf tumhe dhundna chaha
Nazar na aaye tum to kuch naaraaz thi main
Dil mein shor hua kuch phir dhadkanon ka aise
Ki baatein thi tumhari, bas awaz thi main.
Wo hawa ka jhonka jo mujhe chhu gaya tha
Khushboo tumhari usme dhundti rahi main
Baahon mein khudko maine le liya phir aise
Ki tum mein milkar jaise ek ho gayi main.
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bahut achha likha hai…keep writing more poems ????
Thanks Parijat. ☺
Nazar na aaye tum to kuch naaraaz thi main
Dil mein shor hua kuch phir dhadkanon ka aise
Ki baatein thi tumhari, bas awaz thi main.
What touching lines. I probably did not read it properly in 2016 hence the customary “bahut achha”. this is much more than that. Captures the yearnings of a lover for her beloved. One of the best .
Baahon mein khudko maine le liya phir aise
Ki tum mein milkar jaise ek ho gayi main.
What a gem. Each line makes one ponder and fills with such wonderment and joy (joy at the meaingfulness of each word and not at longing). Difficult to pick up the best lines. This is one of your best